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Fiction Mingle

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"Wait Here."
sound check
sylsome wrote in fictionmingle
Photo by Sandra Sweeney
Words by Syl DeLeon
Audio by Psychomelodic



“It won’t take long,” she said, jolly music piping from overhead speakers as she shut the door behind her.  The receptionist popped her gum and glared at me.

When the screaming started, I dug my nails in the seat.  Blood curling, ongoing, pure shrill agony, grunting, with a final guttural heave that ended in a high-pitched whine.

She shuffled out, a wrapped bundle in her arms.  A haunted, dark-eyed smile behind moist bangs, she said, “For you.”  I pulled the cover to find a severed heart, arteries and veins oozing.  The organ convulsed twice in my lap and stopped beating.



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Lol...WOW! Creepy. Love the music with it! The place I shot the pic is a bit strange.
Sonj

It does have that 'strange' vibe about it... in a hygenic kind of way. Are you gonna tell me where this actually was???

I am particularly enamored of the soundtrack for this one :) But ewwwwww is right.

I had to rear it all :)

(Anonymous)

2010-05-12 09:11 pm (UTC)

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I thought fiction mingle was a really good idea. I just went there after a while and noticed that there were several entries I hadn't read/heard or "reard" :P Anyway once I "reard" the first one I had to um "rear" the rest. I think you're onto something. The music definitely brings the writing to life and vis a versa.

Re: I had to rear it all :)

sylsome

2010-05-13 02:41 am (UTC)

"reard"--I LOVE it! Like an internal collaboration just to process the external one. It's genius! :)

Perfect.

(Anonymous)

2010-05-15 05:36 pm (UTC)

Well done, the music is exactly what I hear during these situations, those rooms. -S.Leisure

I totally cracked up when I heard the music and couldn't wait to post it. Glad you enjoyed it, too :)

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